Holy doodle, these are SO random and I feel really mixed about certain lines but I want to get them up here while they're on my mind. I put the stuff I really like in bold.

suspense builds

the drums bellow

belfrys and dungeons

meet with the bludgeons

eternal fog creeps along

lights flicker down the street

as you pass by

a flame goes out

your dress billows in the silty breeze

leave with your gentle hands

touching like cold

holding me hard

a memory of rags and ruins

and put out the star's light

like you've done

with your magic

take the candelabra, drown the flame

I long for nothing that ends

infinitely small holes

letting in all your cold

press your ear up on the glass

to taste a breath

funny how your dream's betrayed.

and you wanted it this way.

you're yelling words I can't hear

-KAHHT